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Poprava Angleščine

Objavljeno: Pe apr 13, 2007 6:49 pm
Napisal/-a fušar
Prosil, bi če mi lahko kdo popravi napake v naslednjem tekstu (časi).
Pretežno sem se v osnovni šoli učil Nemščino, sedaj pa Nemščino in Angleščino, toda Ang. ne obvladam 100%.

GLOBAL PIZZA

People thought that the hamburger was the world’s most popular fast food but they relaice that the pizza in the most popular food,because it’s easy to server or easy to eat and delivered home.

History of pizza
The first idea of using pieces of flat came from Greks.They called them plakuntos and ate them with various simple toppings such as oil,garlic,onions and herb. The Romans called it picea. Raffaele Esposito make pizza in 1889 for King Uberto and Queen Margherita. He make it on Italian way. Queen loved it and the new pizza was named Pizza Margherita.

In 19 th century pizza migrated to America. First pizzeria in USA was opened in 1905. Pizza explored in USA when American soldiers returned from Italy after World War.


New York

New York has a lot of architecture and you can walk the streets and looking skyscrapers.
People in New York are always in a hurry, but they’re not unfriendly. Here seems that everyone to eat out or get food delivered because it’s guicker and easier. People in New York are so busy so you can hardly meet friends. The worst drivers are the taxi drivers. The shops in New York are always opened 9.00 or 10.at nightPeople here work much later or a lot hours a day and they yet only 10 days vocation a year.Living in New York is fantastic, amazing place



London

London has the expensive undergraund. London has great out galleries, museums. Taxi drivers have black cars and they are great and so friendly. It’s different like in New York. People here live up to their reputation. People in London get more vocation time and time off. People here work less than Americans. In London you have great restaurant. London has amix of cultures and nationalities and it’s good to time there.


Samo, če sem pravilno napisal in če je kje napak prosim, če me opomnite.

Objavljeno: Pe apr 13, 2007 7:03 pm
Napisal/-a Spyker
GLOBAL PIZZA

People thought that the hamburger was the world’s most popular fast food but they have relaized that the pizza is more popular because it’s easier to serve and eat and it can be delivered at costumer's home.

History of pizza
The first idea of using pieces of flat came from Greeks. They called them plakuntos and ate them with various simple toppings such as oil, garlic, onions and herb. The Romans called it picea. Raffaele Esposito made pizza in 1889 for King Uberto and Queen Margherita. He made it on Italian way. Queen loved it and the new pizza was named Pizza Margherita.

In the 19th century pizza migrated to America. First pizzeria in USA was opened in 1905. Pizza explored in USA when American soldiers returned from Italy after World War.


New York

New York has a lot of architecture where you can walk on the streets and look at the skyscrapers.
People in New York are always in a hurry, but they’re not unfriendly. It seems that everyone eat outside or they simply order food to their home because it’s quicker and easier. People in New York are so busy you can hardly meet friends. The worst drivers are the taxi drivers. The shops in New York are always open to 9pm or 10pm in the evening. People in New York work longer in a day and they get only 10 days vacation per year. Living in New York is fantastic; it's amazing place.


London

London has got pretty expensive underground. It also has great galleries and museums. Taxi drivers have black cars and they are great and very friendly. There's a pretty big difference betwen New York and London. People in London live up to their reputation. They get more vacation days per year. They also work less than Americans. In London you have great restaurants. London has a lot of cultures and nationalities and it’s a good place to live.

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Res zelo na hitrco popravljeno, če se že kdo drug ne bo pojavil da bi mal bolj solidno popravil, jest zdele niti nimam cajta. Slabš ni, dost boljš pa tud ne :lol: Je še daleč od solidnega teksta.

Objavljeno: Pe apr 13, 2007 8:34 pm
Napisal/-a gold hamster
relaized.....-realized

Re: Poprava Angleščine

Objavljeno: Pe apr 13, 2007 8:46 pm
Napisal/-a esem
fušar je napisal/-a:Pizza explored in USA when American soldiers returned from Italy after World War.

vsaj še explored >> exploded

Objavljeno: Pe apr 13, 2007 9:12 pm
Napisal/-a In_Liner
to je iz učbenika za 1,2 letnik

Objavljeno: Pe apr 13, 2007 10:07 pm
Napisal/-a Pollo
Spyker je napisal/-a:GLOBAL PIZZA

People thought that the hamburger was the world’s most popular fast food but they have realized that the pizza is more popular because it’s easier to serve and to eat and it can be delivered to the costumer's home.

History of pizza
The first idea of using pieces of flat came from Greeks. They called them plakuntos and ate them with various simple toppings such as oil, garlic, onions and herb. The Romans called it picea. Raffaele Esposito made pizza in 1889 for King Uberto and Queen Margherita. He made it on Italian way. Queen loved it and the new pizza was named Pizza Margherita.

In the 19th century pizza emigrated to America. First pizzeria in USA was opened in 1905. Pizza exploded in USA when American soldiers returned from Italy after the First World War.


New York

"New York has a lot of architecture where you can walk on the streets and look at the skyscrapers".
"People in New York are always in a hurry, but they’re not unfriendly". It seems that everyone eat outside or they simply order food to their home because it’s quicker and easier. People in New York are so busy, that you can hardly make any friends. The worst drivers are the taxi drivers. The shops in New York are always open to 9pm or 10pm in the evening. People in New York work longer in a day and they get only 10 days of vacation per year. Living in New York is fantastic; it's such an amazing place.


London

London has got a pretty expensive underground. It also has some great galleries and museums." Taxi drivers have black cars and they are great and very friendly." There's a pretty big difference betwen New York and London. People in London live up to their reputation. They get more vacation days per year. They also work less than Americans. In London you have some great restaurants. London has a lot of cultures and nationalities and it’s a good place to live.



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Res zelo na hitrco popravljeno, če se že kdo drug ne bo pojavil da bi mal bolj solidno popravil, jest zdele niti nimam cajta. Slabš ni, dost boljš pa tud ne :lol: Je še daleč od solidnega teksta.


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Objavljeno: Pe apr 13, 2007 11:31 pm
Napisal/-a fušar
lenivec je napisal/-a:vbistvu je tale tex na zlo osnovnem nivoju napisan. zakaj ga rabiš sploh :) da vidimo če je smisleno it v večje spremembe hehe


Point je v tem, da sem na začetku napisal svoj tekst, na ta način sem hotel testirat sebe koliko znam, zdej pa rabim 100% popravke le na ta način se bom naučil dobro Angleščino.

Objavljeno: Pe apr 13, 2007 11:52 pm
Napisal/-a snoopek
tole je v učbeniku za 1 letnik mislim da oz. 2! zakaj pa tam not ne pogledaš?

headway al ka je že ta učbenik biu? sm že pozabu, spounem pa se da smo mel neke take teme na maturi tud!

Objavljeno: So apr 14, 2007 12:24 am
Napisal/-a fušar
snoopek je napisal/-a:tole je v učbeniku za 1 letnik mislim da oz. 2! zakaj pa tam not ne pogledaš?

headway al ka je že ta učbenik biu? sm že pozabu, spounem pa se da smo mel neke take teme na maturi tud!


to je povsem res, toda na ta način se lažje naučim Angleščino kot pa da samo tam nakaj par stavkov prepišem in sem kao končal

Objavljeno: So apr 14, 2007 4:14 pm
Napisal/-a Lonca84
ma uredu je....angleščina je itak kr neki...pr ns mal preveč komplicirajo, v angliji je čist drugo....uredu napisan-oz. popravljen....sj ni treba d je vse prov!!!! :D

Objavljeno: Ne apr 15, 2007 10:02 am
Napisal/-a dj_em
vrjetno obiskuješ sredno turistično :D

Objavljeno: Ne apr 15, 2007 5:26 pm
Napisal/-a Lonca84
mam sorodnike v angliji pa so mi rekl da prov prepoznajo tujce ker govorijo pravilno angleščino...oni sploh ne uporabljajo tolk časov, besede čist drugač izgovorijo pa stavke drugače oblikujejo-po domače povedano! Njihova slovnica je pomembna sam ni pa tolk obsežna kokr pr ns!!!!!

Objavljeno: Po apr 16, 2007 5:25 pm
Napisal/-a protonika
Lonca84 je napisal/-a:mam sorodnike v angliji pa so mi rekl da prov prepoznajo tujce ker govorijo pravilno angleščino...oni sploh ne uporabljajo tolk časov, besede čist drugač izgovorijo pa stavke drugače oblikujejo-po domače povedano! Njihova slovnica je pomembna sam ni pa tolk obsežna kokr pr ns!!!!!


Tile Angleži, da jim uspe takole razkrinkati tujce, kaj, zaradi hiperpravilnosti? :D

Objavljeno: Po apr 16, 2007 6:50 pm
Napisal/-a Spyker
Naučeno in prirojeno angleščino loči pomojem vsak, tud ob dveh ponoč če ga zbudiš. More bit res dober "united speaker", da te lahko nafuka in da misliš da je res anglež/američan, odvisno v katerem naglasu govori.

Objavljeno: Po apr 16, 2007 9:49 pm
Napisal/-a adis
dj_em je napisal/-a:vrjetno obiskuješ sredno turistično :D


hahahahhaha

jst vem pr seb, da se ang.jezika nebi naučil če nebi gledal cartoon network od malega tko da.....to je treba od malega začet se pomal učit

mah ti angleži so kr neki, majo čudne naglase da glava boli v primerjavi z američani kaj šele avstralci joj.......ga sploh ne razumeš kaj govori fak

Objavljeno: To apr 17, 2007 11:29 am
Napisal/-a Lonca84
Enkrat smo se pogovarjal kere čase poznajo pa so me sam debel gledal k sem jz začela naštevat vseh 12 al kok jih je....oni tko z 4imi znajo vse povedat, pa sploh nč ne komplicirajo, razumejo te vse....sj ne rečem d jz ful obvladam, sploh ne, ampak kar smo se pogovarjal so vse razumel!! tko da men je pomembno sam to da se znam kj zment...sj za pisat pa kak slovar mal prečekiram, pač prfoksi sam mal komplicirajo....sam na faksu delajo bolj na tem da se pogovarjaš, sj prej pa ne!!!